Teri aankhon mein teri rooh jhalakti hai
Teri muskaan se meri saans atakti hai
Teri hansi mein meri khushi bhatakti hai
Mera naam tumhare labhon par aaye yun
Jaise hoton se tumhare sudha tapakti hai
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'It is better to light a small candle than to curse the darkness.'
9 comments:
The word "sudha" disturbed the flow methinx. I'm getting cynical now I guess :)
P.S - I can't see what is the 4th option in the Reactions. Maybe you could do something to the placement?
lovely...as usual!
Magpie, late reply I know, but, you know, I agree with you... about 'sudha' that is. Any suggestions? My creative genius fell short at this juncture...
Romola, thanks for stopping by. Gaana tha to nahin par soch rahi hoon ki poora likh doon.
I'm short on the creative front as far as getting poetic goes. Loved the picture
stumbled upon it accidentally!!!loved it....
I thought you would have updated by now.
Now I am getting angry with you
Maithilee...it's time okay..
Dont know about others but I am missing your original shayari..
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